Sara's burning desire
This is a story of suicide during sex. Please keep in mind this is merely a first draft, but I would love some feedback to make the necessary adjustments.
If you do not like this type of story, do not read it.
Sara smiled to herself; she knew this was the right moment to begin. She and Mike had planned this for a while, and they were excited now because this was the moment they had been waiting for months.
They never really picked a date, they just decided to say goodbye to everyone they knew and moved to their little cabin deep in the Canadian woods. They were aware they weren’t going to leave this place alive, so they didn’t pack much, and as soon as they arrived, they decided to throw all of their clothes into the fireplace, and burn them into ashes.
They spent the next few days naked, in bed, having sex all the time. It was heaven. Being aware that they would die soon was a liberating experience, they had nothing to worry about, nothing to think about, and they could just focus on ravaging each other’s bodies. And it was that passion, that thirst for each other that led them to the decision of dying together, while having sex. Thought it had been merely a fantasy to them for many years, it became an obsession.
Sara and Mike had been together for 9 years, and even though she was 5 years older than him, their relationship ran smoothly. Sara, who was now 32, was a Saudi girl raised in Mexico, and she had that exotic look Mike was addicted to. He wanted to enjoy every part of her body before dying, and for some reason, the desire was much more intense now, since their arrival to the cabin. They had lived in Manhattan for 9 years, so they were used to an urban environment, and now, being completely isolated from the world was such a turn-on. No one knew what they were about to do, and even if someone knew, no one could ever possibly find them. They were on their own. And they loved it.
They didn’t know how much longer they were going to wait before carrying out their plans, but on the morning of the fifth day, Sara realized she couldn’t wait any longer. While Mike was still sleeping, Sara approached the nearest window and looked outside. It was October, and the woods were saturated with deep, warm colors. She opened the door and walked out of the cabin, to the porch, fully naked. She knew how she wanted to die, and Mike liked the idea, too, but she knew it was going to be excruciatingly painful. However, this was one of the reasons why she found that method so attractive. She was never the masochist type, and neither was Mike, but there was something about this extreme method that made it sexy and romantic. She was wondering how long would it take for them to die, and she hoped it wouldn’t be too quick, because she wanted to savor every second of it.
Instead of scaring her, the thought of the pain and the long time it would take for them to die sent her into a sudden orgasm. She started touching herself, especially her hard, pink nipples, which Mike enjoyed sucking for hours. She then started to slide her hand across her stomach, down to her pussy. It was soaking wet, and she started rubbing her clit furiously. She started moaning and before she could cum, she felt Mike’s hands on her waist, approaching her from behind. He kissed her neck and asked her to keep going.
“Oh, fuck me, baby, please. I need you to fuck me.”, she said.
Mike smiled and slid his tongue into her mouth, he let her suck his tongue for a few seconds and then he pushed her against the handrail of the porch. His cock was now rock hard and it was easy to slide it into her wet pussy. She started moaning, louder and louder with every thrust, until she started screaming. After all these years, Mike was still surprised at the amazing feeling of being inside Sara. He had fucked many women in his lifetime, and the sex with Sara was simply the best he ever had. Just as he was about to cum, Sara made him stop. Mike pulled his cock out of her and she turned around to face him, and they kissed. They were about the same height, so he didn’t really have to lean down that much. Despite being almost 5’7”, Sara looked very fragile, but there was fire in her eyes. She could easily intimidate anyone with those eyes and he thought that was one of the reasons why he fell so hard for her.
They licked each other’s tongues for a while and then, Sara started kissing his neck. And then his chest, and she kept going down, licking his skin and making him moan. Sara grabbed Mike’s penis with one hand and looked at it. The head was swollen and dripping juice. His penis felt almost hot and Sara almost had a new orgasm. She licked the tip of his cock, tasting the clear juice coming out of it. Sara opened her mouth and took Mike’s penis as deep as she could.
It felt amazing. Mike could see Sara’s head moving, she could hear her moaning, and his pleasure was increasing, until he couldn’t hold it anymore.
“I’m cumming, sweetie”, he moaned.
Sara did what she always did: she kept sucking, thirsty for that big, thick load she was about to get. The cum filled her mouth quickly, faster than she could swallow, she some it dripped from her mouth and fell on her beautiful breasts. She swallowed as much as she could and then she looked Mike in the eye. He grabbed her hand and pulled her up. They kissed again. She couldn’t wait anymore.
“Let’s do it now”, she said.
Mike smiled at her and walked her back into the cabin, holding her hand. They closed the door behind them. That was the last time they would ever see the sun. She got on the bed and started masturbating furiously. Her legs wide open, he could easily see the beautiful, pink lips of her pussy. He approached her and put his head between her thighs. Without a warning, he started licking her pussy. Her taste was simply delicious. She was moaning, but after a couple of minutes, she started screaming. Mike loved that.
“Oh, my God, I’m going to cum!” she said, “Don’t stop, don’t stop!”
But he had no intention of doing so. He kept licking until she came. Her orgasm was the most intense she ever had, so she screamed like she never had before. They kissed once more. She was desperate now.
“Please, let’s do it, I can’t take it anymore, I want us to melt into each other”.
Mike agreed and walked away from the bed to one of their bags, which was on the floor. He brought the bad to the bed and took out a few plastic bottles. Inside these bottles was a gel, a very flammable gel, which looked some kind of skin oil, with an amberish hue. Sara pulled Mike to the bed and he fell on his back. She got on top of him and kissed him once more. Without much of an effort, she grabbed his cock and guided it back into her pussy. Once it was inside of her, she began riding him, slowly, and while she was doing that, she opened the first bottle and poured the gel on her chest and her neck. Mike was so turned on by this, he started moaning, and he rubbed the gel on her shoulders and her breasts.
Sara opened up a second bottle and poured the gel on his chest, his shoulders and his face. While he rubbed her breasts, she rubbed the gel all over him. Mike used a third bottle to cover Sara’s back and ass with the gel. She was crazy with lust now, the look on her eyes made it obvious. She knew what was coming and she couldn’t believe they were really going to do it. Up until a few days ago, it had been just a fantasy. But now, it was about to turn into a reality. A very painful, and erotic reality. This triggered a new orgasm and it was so intense, Sara couldn’t even make a sound. She couldn’t breathe. After a few seconds, she was just trembling. She kissed Mike and said:
“Fire, my love, I need fire”.
“We are going to be burning to death in a couple of minutes”, he said to her.
Mike used another bottle to cover his legs and her legs too. And while he did that, she opened up the last bottle to pour the content on her head, covering her hair and face. They were now ready. They pushed the empty bottles off the bed and she started riding him passionately. They were both moaning and screaming now.
“I’m ready, my love, let’s die together”, he said.
Sara reached out to the empty bag which was still on the bed, and pulled out a black zippo.
“There’s no turning back now, baby: we are going to die”, she said.
Sara kissed Mike on the lips and said:
“So am I, my love”.
Sara hit the lighter and she looked at the flame for a few seconds. Her heart was racing, she couldn’t believe she was actually going to do it. And she knew she was going to do it because she couldn’t stop. She didn’t want to stop. She needed this. They both needed it.
Sara took the flame to her breasts and decided to light her right nipple first. She moaned as her nipple caught on fire. It was just a tiny blue flame at first and the feeling was amazing, almost cold, which surprised her. She then took the zippo flame to her other nipple and lit it as well. She was a little hesitant at first, because the blue flames didn’t appear to spread, so she considered lighting her hair as well, but then the blue flames started to cover her breasts and she knew this was it. She threw the zippo away and held hands with Mike. She started riding him again. She looked at him in the eye.
“Watch me burn, baby, I’m burning. We’re burning!”
Mike was thrilled.
“Oh, God, yes!”
Sara smiled and threw her head back, she closed her eyes and then the first wave of pain hit her; she opened her eyes, she was surprised.
“Oh, God!”, she gasped.
The fire spread to her shoulders and from there, it started to move down her back and arms, and up her neck. She didn’t think the pain was going to be so intense, but she already knew the pain was going to be way more than she could handle, so she closed her eyes again and, as if she was talking to the fire, she said:
“I’m yours now”.
She didn’t feel a thing when the fire started to burn her hair. This happened almost at the same time the fire touched Mike’s stomach and it started to spread all over his body. She began to ride him faster. Despite the pain and the smell of her burning flesh, Sara could still feel Mike’s cock inside her and the pleasure was almost as intense as the pain.
The fire covered her head, and a few moments later, it spread to her face. The adrenaline was pumping and for a moment, she got the impression she was quickly getting used to the pain. Now that she was engulfed in flames, she knew the only thing left to do was to enjoy her last moments with Mike, so she leaned down and kissed him passionately, as the fire started to spread to the sheets.
The two lovers, now fully covered in fire, held each other as they endured a whole minute of the most excruciating pain they could have ever imagined. Sara screamed when she felt the fire was burning her eyes. This is when she realized, “fuck it, I’m going to be dead in a few minutes anyway”, so she decided to revel in the pain and with great difficulty, she got up again and kept riding Mike’s cock. Suddenly, she realized she wasn’t feeling the fire that much anymore, the pain was fading, and for a moment, she was worried that the fire was dying. But it wasn’t: her skin was dying and she was losing sensibility. When Mike ran his hands across her waist, Sara’s skin simply peeled off. She smiled to herself: now that the pain wasn’t going to be a problem, she could enjoy the rest of the experience.
Mike sat up and he started sucking on her nipples, grabbing each breast with his hands. And just like with the skin on Sara’s waist, the skin on her breasts peeled off as well. Sara, terribly turned on by this, was unable to resist the temptation and yelled:
“Eat my fucking tits!”
Mike, enormously aroused by this, took a bite on Sara’s left breast. This causes her another orgasm and she’s unable to keep her eyes open. The orgasm is so intense she doesn’t realize she’s ripping some skin off Mike’s back. Mike is so focused on eating the skin off her tits he doesn’t notice what she’s doing to his back. In a strange, twisted way, she finds pleasure in helping the fire destroying their bodies. Suddenly, she feels the need of peeling the skin off her own body, but as she tries to move, she realizes the fire has melted the skin of her thighs into Mike’s legs.
Without being able to move much, they decide to just stop moving and let the fire finish the job. Sara pushes Mike against the bed and she kisses him one last time. She closes her eyes and smiles, knowing that, whoever finds them, won’t be able to separate their bodies.
The fire, which has now spread to the rest of the cabin, continues to burn. It’s only a matter of time before the cabin collapses.
Sara’s conscience starts fading away, and she no longer feels anything. She’s unable to find out if Mike’s still alive, but she doesn’t care, she knows they will be together forever.